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Re: Retrospect: A Mix for Hourglass [Part I]
YAY! I loved making this mix, and reading all your nerdy comments was a bonus, Sam. Right now I am combining all the other sides into zips so I can ...
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: Guttersnipe: Chapter Four
Sam, Thank you oh- so -much for this critique. :D - "Archie caught the glimpse of a smile on Henry’s face. He frowned at his stilted appearance in the full-length ...
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: Šekherezada
Davidude, Thank you for the critique and for pointing out all those typos et al. I wrote that description of Drifter's Gulch very late at night, that is probably why ...
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: Cal's Texty Icony-Avatar Thingies
Abby, WATCH FIREFLY! Cal. Thanks write me, I think they need some color, too. :D Ta, Cal.
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: A Greenstick Fracture
Sam, Thanks honey for the critique, it's been awhile since I posted this and your response, but I thank thee all the same. I had a real hard time dealing ...
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: Fool's Duel: On the Edge of the World, Facing Up
Shadow & Sarah, Thank you so much for those critiques, sorry it has taken me so long to get back to you. I've been busy. The reason it cuts off ...
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: Hedgewitch [Ch I]
Lynlyn, Thanks for leaving me this critique, sorry it's been a few days. I'll see what I can do about those block descriptions, I am foremost a description writer, that's ...
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: It's my sweet 16!!!!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY WIGGY! A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: Victorian America/England/India/Spain...
Oh, I forgot. Victorian Drug Stats Victorian Substance Abuse Famous Victorian Murders Defining; the victorian era : England and Victorian Era Victorian Cartoons Poisoning in Victorian Times Victorian
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: Victorian America/England/India/Spain...
Hey hon, You've already got my opium project, here are some other things that I've gathered over time. Overview on Victorian England -- Victorian England: An Introduction VRW : Victorian ...
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: Retrospect: A Mix for Hourglass [Part I]
Hey peeps! Another mix from me, isn't this exciting? I think so. So this one is for Sam, starring her novel Hourglass . All songs are in mp3 format, so ...
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: Would you buy a YWS Stuffed Monkey?
YES! It's so cuute.
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: Top Ten Grammar Mistakes You Shouldn't Make
#1 is correct. The way I remember if it is either I or me is I take out everything in the middle and see if it still makes sense. So, ...
Aug 27, 2007 -
Re: How to Get Rid of Talking Heads
YAY! Wonderful tutorial on how talking heads are evil. *Keep to your characters! Don't make them have a physical reaction simply for the sake of a physical reaction, especially if ...
Aug 27, 2007 -
Re: First Person Poems
Some of my favorite first person poetry. I am planning on putting a pdf of poetry together for people to download, since Clau asked me for some poetry recommendations a ...
Aug 26, 2007
